A child cried alone in a basket of fruits. A passer by looked around, seeing none around in this locality of Old Delhi. He called around and hurriedly left the place before someone could see him. Another car passed by, a couple around 40 stopped by, saw the child, waited around and called 101. It was past midnight. Not many lights were on in the houses nearby. The couple picked up the child and cuddled it. It felt as if it was their own child. The hugged it and hurriedly left the place with the child in the car. Probably they did not want the police to take it from them. It was a girl and they did not have one even in 15 years of their marriage. A cute one. One window on the 3rd floor of a wretched house, Neelam kept crying in her old house at GB Road till she finally fell asleep. The most peaceful sleep she ever had. Her daughter wouldnt have to live that life ever.
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Subhomoy ATGS Bakshi
June 19, 2011 at 10:58 pm
AWESOME! :O
SPEECHLESS!!!
Subhomoy ATGS Bakshi
June 19, 2011 at 10:59 pm
This is AWESOME! :O
Sacrifice!
Smeeta
June 20, 2011 at 6:33 am
very well written…
I had to search about GB road for it to make complete sense.
Nishant Sah
June 20, 2011 at 7:23 am
@Moy… Thanks yaar
@Smeeta.. Thanks. I guess I could have mede it complete by putting a couple of words which would describe the area..
SHIRSA AICH
June 20, 2011 at 9:24 am
awesome!
SHIRSA AICH
June 20, 2011 at 9:25 am
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Phoenix
June 21, 2011 at 5:19 pm
wow ! short stories are the toughest to write .. coz u have less time for the reader to connect to the characters .. but u are so effortless ! way to go !
Nishant Sah
June 22, 2011 at 11:41 am
@Shirsa: Tx
@Surabhi: Thank you.. thank you
Tukai
June 22, 2011 at 12:35 pm
cool stry
with good story line.
errr…..dont mind…..but they didnt have problem with adoption rights?
Tukai
June 22, 2011 at 12:36 pm
cool storyline and nyc innovative work
but didnt the couple have problems with adoption rigths?
R0hIt
June 22, 2011 at 4:09 pm
awesome bro
..touching
Kim
June 25, 2011 at 9:40 am
well written nishant
kim
June 25, 2011 at 9:42 am
Well written nishant
Shreyas Raghavendra
July 9, 2011 at 10:08 am
Good one